Author Topic: QUESTION AND ANSWER ULTIMATE COMPILATION (Read 330 times)

TIFFANY JONES / TIFF 15 · « **on:** November 09, 2019, 12:25:47 pm »

[WRITER TALKING]
HI TAILS, IT'S ME, TIFFANY. I'VE DECIDED TO CLEAN UP OUR QUESTION AND ANSWER SERIES AND COMBINE THEM HERE. THIS WAY, IT WILL BE EASIER
FOR BOTH OF US TO KEEP TRACK OF WHAT'S BEEN ANSWERED AND WHAT HASNT. SO, AS THEY SAY IN THE SHOW, LET'S DO IT TO IT!

[TAILS]
Book 1 chapters 1-3

That might make things more clear or you could say writer talking?

I'm just trying to help.

Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

[TIFFANY]
That's why I'm working it out here instead of on my own. fleshing the story out here with you guys helps me post a better story on http://www.fanfiction.net (I'm not saying I'm using you guys, far from it! it's just easier to work out kinks and get advice on here than just doing it on my own.)

[TAILS]
Well when I first started reading On chapter 1 I got the sense of being tiff Spot Imagine waking up in a tube-like that it's like having a no memory

[TIFF]
Tiff had been knocked out when she was captured. when she woke up, she was already halfway roboticized (she just didn't realize it at the time) and the Roboticizer itself was going haywire. I'll try to explain that in the next chapter.

[TAILS]
She needs more backstory to her

[TIFFANY]
it's coming, I promise! it's coming!

[TAILS]
I'm not sure if tails wood be saying Mister or miss before same somebody's name / I've never seen that in the comics or the shows / it just didn't sound write to me

[TIFFANY]
Hmm. I don't recall seeing it either. I just felt he didn't know Tristina well enough to call her either 'Tiffany' or 'Aunt Tiffany' just yet.

[TAILS]
Can you draw a picture of your design of the Wheelchair and posted here design sounds interesting / reminds me of the wheelchair that Professor Exavier uses in x-men stories

[TIFFANY]
I thought about how I wanted Tiffs wheelchair to look for about 2 hours, (I like to keep my mind busy at work) and I still haven't gotten all the details out yet. I'm not that good at drawing wheelchairs, but I'll see what I can do.

[TAILS]
So tif. Has the powers of Jake 2.0 / that's not a bad thing it's nice touch / so TIF is a super hacker I think that's why IRobot Nick wanted her
Overcoming adversity is a great message in the story

[TIFFANY]
Who's Jake 2.0? anyways, yeah, Robotnik realized Tiff was using his spy orbs to spy on him, so he figured 'hey, Roboticize her and use her abilities for my purposes.' Overcoming adversity is a theme and a message I love working with. I feel if my main character has nothing to overcome or no 'status quo' to challenge, then they're just not worth my time to write about. (Not saying stories that aren't like that are bad, I just don't like writing about them.)

[TAILS]
At least that's what I got out of it or read into it

[TIFFANY]
You pretty much hit the nail on the head, tails.

[TAILS]
That's funny Darcy is just there ride thank you for flying with Dragan Airlines today we hope you have had a pleasant flight and fly with us again sometime we appreciate your business lolololol

[TIFFANY]
well sure, Dulcy has ice breath and can breathe fire, but most of the time I've seen her is with a freedom fighter or two on her back.

[TAILS]
However, You want to say it

[TIFFALY]
LOL!

TIFFANY JONES / TIFF 15 · « **Reply #1 on:** November 09, 2019, 12:35:16 pm »

[TAILS]
Sorry I have a hard time typing

[TIFFANY]
Don't worry about it. I'm sorry if I sounded judgmental. I honestly have a difficult time with grammar myself.

[TAILS]
But as time went on he found out he could control technologies. Traffic lights walkways. Cable boxes. You know just much anything with a digital signal he just stares at it and concentrates so the CIA Started training him to be an a-gent

[TIFFANY]
Hmm. interesting. I may impliment that in my own story sometime in future books. I hope you dont mind.

[TAILS]
if you look on YouTube you may find Jake 2.0 on there

[TIFFANY]
I'll have to check it out sometime.

[TAILS]
Yes she does overcoming to adapting to a new way moviing. I didn't mean to imply persecution its just that also if I found out I was paralyzed in a part of my body I've been super mad to

[TIFFANY]
Its okay. Ive been trying to get this type of story to work for years. I'm glad to hear Ive finally accomplished it...at least in one fan fiction.

[TAILS]
I don't know maybe I didn't say it right

[TIFFANY]
dont worry about it. I totally get what you mean.

[TAILS]
I hit the nail on the head are you talking about Darcy being a ride or the girl hedgehog in a wheelchair overcoming adversity?

[TIFFANY]
both actually

[TAILS]
I would say thanks but first I have to know what you mean.

[TIFFANY]
Now you do :p

[TAILS]
Makes me wonder where did she get the harness in the first place or her winter clothes where did Darcy get these? Something to Think about

[TIFFANY]
Maybe the freedom fighters made them for her? I don't recall Sabina or any other dragon in the series wearing clothes or a harness.

[TAILS]
Well that's OK to from time to time to add more to a story

[TIFFANY]
LOL, isnt that the whole point of posting it here first? to add more to the story?

[TAILS]
But in the Saturday am part well I don't remember the buzz bomber being in Your story It would be nice if he was like that part.

[TIFFANY]
the story technically started AFTER Sonic, Rotor, and Tails escaped the buzz bomber attack but BEFORE they arrived in knothole. it makes more sense if you don't think about it too much.

[TAILS]
Well I'm happy to know a little bit more about you tiff

[TIFFANY]
Not a problem! I'm happy to have you help on the story!

[TAILS]
What website did you look up Antone's biography cuz I looked up real animals and just thought that it would be accurate for him

[TIFFANY]
on this site. http://www.saturdaymorningsonic.com

[TAILS]
Or you can always change anything you want the new version.

[TIFFANY]
I might make some changes later. maybe after the story is finished.

[TAILS]
Can you also please post the new version to this site

Fanfiction.net doesn't work well for me / thanks

[TIFFANY]
you mean the forum or http://www.saturdaymorningsonic.com itself? ethier way, Id be happy to, tails! thanks!

TIFFANY JONES / TIFF 15 · « **Reply #2 on:** November 09, 2019, 02:49:39 pm »

[TAILS]

Regular mustard swamp by description you have a craft on two legs. / that made me laugh. Very funny ****

[TIFFANY]
YOUR WELCOME!

[TAILS]
I don't remember if it was in Book one or book 2 but in the end there was this part on Sally wanted to talk to her. /// and it was never talked about to Sonic on the others why she lied about the names / her name to them

I mean I know you told me the reason. When we were talking. But it was never put the story. / will that be fixed?

[TIFFANY]
NOT ENTIRELY SURE. I'D FORGOTTEN ABOUT IT, ACTUALLY. AND IT WAS BOOK 1.

[TAILS]
Apartment body is back to not cool

Bunny is on a stack of hey. And Antoine. Is helping her

Bunny only has one robot arm her left one and right one is all flesh and blood

I'm not going to be able to chapter mark from here it's just too hard

[TIFFANY]
THATS FINE. DEPENDING ON THE POSITION, BUNNIE'S ROBOTIC ARM CAN BE VIEWED AS ETHIER LEFT OR RIGHT. IF YOU'RE FACING BUNNIE, ITS LEFT, IF YOU'RE FACING ANTIONE, ITS RIGHT.

[TAILS]
When Sonic is in bus of form it looks like he's all

Buzzsaw form he's all blue with white lights reflecting off him

What are you talking about make a list of

What are you talking about an egg in a nest of cables. / where is this from

Right now I'm on Chapter two parts 2

[TIFFANY]
I'M...FAILING TO DETECT A QUESTION THERE, TAILS. ARE YOU MAKING NOTES FOR YOURSELF? ITS OKAY IF YOU ARE, JUST GIVE ME A HEADS UP, YEAH?

[TAILS]
Bookmark. I left off on chapter 2 part 3 Book 3 Switched Sally

Between the parts of speech / her to put his head

Black space

Tiff. Wake up

[TIFFANY]
I DONT UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU'RE SAYING, TAILS

[TAILS]
What is this banging that wakes you up tiff. When sonic wakes you up what's causing it where does it come from ?

Peach for covered arms I meant to say fee.r/ Hope you know what I mean

I always imagined it there arms the same as human arms and legs when shown in that way the peach would be the skin color. With very little arm and leg hair. I guess that means its on Sonic belly is like that too

At least that's how I've always imagined it to be

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

As a meeting, I'm looking back on t

As I'm looking at this I'm also looking at the episodes. And looking at the giant floppy disk I can't help but think. Look at the size of that thing lol

What do you mean > rotor just emerging from his trees / give an explanation on this is needed

Water to me look like a monkey green murky green with some blue in it like lake water

Fox kit or fox not just kit I'm apart of tales grabbing the

On the part of kale scrapping the bell

On the of tails grabbing the Power Ring

[TIFFANY]

"Tiff! wake up!"
Tristina's arms shoved her body into a sitting position at the sound. adrenaline coursing through her veins, Tristina's muscles tensed as her eyes adjusted to the moonlit hut. the banging that had woke her pierced the air once again. "I'm up! I'm up!" Tristina called, mainly to silence the harsh pounding. "We gotta be ready to juice, Tiff! its 2 hours 'till the next ring!"

THE 'BANGING' WAS SONIC BANGING HIS FIST ON TIFF'S HUT DOOR TO WAKE HER UP.

As Tristina's peach furred arms bristled at the cool morning air,
IS THIS THE LINE GIVING YOU TROUBLE?

AH, I SEE. I IMAGINE THE FUR ON TRISTINA'S ARMS IS VERY SHORT AND SOFT, WHILE THE BLUE FUR ON HER BODY IS A BIT STIFFER, BUT STILL SHORT.

WHEN YOU SAID As a meeting, I'm looking back on t I GET THE FEELING THAT YOU GOT CUT OFF MID THOUGHT? I DONT UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU WERE SAYING.

ROTOR 'EMERGING' FROM THE TREES WAS JUST ROTOR WALKING OUT FROM BEHIND IT.

ALSO, I IMAGINE THE WATER CLOSE TO KNOTHOLE IS PURER THAN WATER FROM ROBOTROPILIS. WATER CAN HAVE VARYING SHADES OF BLUE OR GREEN.

'KIT' IS ALSO OFTEN USED SHORT FOR 'FOX KIT'. TAILS IS ONLY 10 IN SATAM, RIGHT? TO SONIC, SALLY, ROTOR, ANTIONE AND BUNNIE, HE'S STILL A KID.

[TAILS]
Chapter 3 part 1. Input.

It should be mentioned in the cell bars color is like a blue neon white light

[TIFFANY]

~~A MINOR AESTHETIC, BUT I'LL GO BACK AND FIX IT LATER.~~
FIXED!

What is the meaning that you have to this word * pseudo * what is its intent for?

[TIFFANY]

PSEUDO, GENERALLY MEANING 'FAKE' OR 'NON-EXISTANT' HERE'S THE WIKIPEDIA DEFINITION:

adjective
not genuine; spurious or sham.

noun
a pretentious or insincere person.

[TAILS]
Instead of putting in the word crooned. Please put the definition of what it means

Because I had to look it up but Google is not working well right now

[TIFFANY]
BASICALLY, THE ROBOT SALLY WAS MOCKING THE REAL SALLY, AS WELL AS SHOWING HER THAT YES, SHE COULD EVEN FOOL SONIC AND TRISTINA. AT LEAST, THAT'S WHAT IT MEANT IN THAT CONTEXT.

[TAILS]
Also, I can't see all the texts. On my tablet

Chapter 3 part 2

About the camera parts. In the cartoon the camera, pops up behind Sonic but in your version it sounds like the cameras long distance in front of him to the left before he throws a rock at it

[TIFFANY]
IT WASNT THAT FAR. I HAD TO 'SCOOT' THE CAMERA OVER SLIGHTLY SO THERE WOULD BE ROOM FOR TIFF AND HER WHEELCHAIR. IN THE CARTOON, IT WAS DIRECTLY BEHIND SONIC.

[TAILS]
Okay so now there's a red button on the joystick. I'm sorry to say this but that's not possible no joystick is big enough to hold button that is the right size to be put on a joystick. / part needs to be changed. If not you need to give me more design information about the joystick

[TIFFANY]
TIFFANYS JOYSTICK ON HER WHEELCHAIR MORE CLOSELY RESEMBLES A VIDEO GAME JOYSTICK. THE RED BUTTON (WHICH WAS ABOUT THE SIZE OF A DIME) WAS TO INCREASE THE LOWER FAN'S ROTATION BENEATH HER WHEELCHAIR. THIS EXTRA ROTATION GAVE HER A BOOST OF AIR NEEDED TO ESCAPE THE HOVERCRAFT.

[TAILS]
Chapter 3 part 3

What color is the keypad made out of light what does it look like what is its shape? How big is it how many keys does it have ?

[TIFFANY]
THE KEYPAD IS A LIGHT BLUE, AND IS ABOUT THE SIZE OF A MODERN CALCULATOR. AS FOR HOW MANY KEYS, THINK OF THE KEYPAD OF NICOLE, AND TAKE OFF THE MONITOR

[TAILS]
Add to the 2 purple orbs appear what do they do ?

[TIFFANY]
YOU MEAN 'PUPILESS' NOT 'PURPLE'. ESSENTIALLY, THIS IS TRISTINA'S BODY SWITCHING ITSELF INTO 'HACKING' MODE, WHICH ALLOWS HER TO ACCESS THE SPY ORBS PROGRAMMING AND ADD OR SUBTRACT FROM IT AS SHE DEEMS FIT.

[TAILS]
Before returning to her mind. That just doesn't sound l write to me

[TIFFANY]
ESSENTIALLY, TRISTINA WAS IN THE 'MIND' OF THE SPY ORB, ALTERING ITS PROGRAMMING.

[TAILS]
Thinking needs to be fixed something else we put in its place

Maybe it should be returning to her own brain. After all what position is position stuff with possession stuff? It's like an out of body experience

And yes I don't delete sentence with States. Mistakes Backtracking is too hard

And very slow

[TIFFANY]
AND SOMETIMES ALSO VERY TEDIOUS. AH, THE CHALLENGES OF BEING A FAN FICTION WRITER.

[TAILS]
Chapter 3 part 4. What you're talking about the cell number. It would be nice if you actually had a number on there 54

I'm just saying

[TIFFANY]
I'M JUST BORROWING FROM WHAT SONIC SAID LATER IN THE SERIES "OPEN CELL NUMBER 54"

[TAILS]
I love that part about trying to hold back till after the laughter. I have that same reaction when I watch the episode hello I'm having a reaction now trying to not think of it. / its just too good. But maybe you should put the definition of the word in there

[TIFFANY]

DEFINITION OF WHAT WORD? STIFLED?

[TAILS]
2 in which the description of the story. And so others don't have to look up a word here and there

[TIFFANY]
OH, 'CROONED' AND 'STIFLED' YOU MEAN?

[TAILS]
But how do they get out of the village? And furthermore, how is your character going to get back in?

[TIFFANY]
AS FAR AS OUT, GOES, I IMAGINE SONIC RUNS UP THE TREE SLIDE WHILE TIFFANY USES HOVER MODE OUTSIDE OF IT.

[TAILS]
Here is an important question. We know how everybody gets into knothole to the slight injury through the wooden tube but how to figure it out if not all

[TIFFANY]
I DONT KNOW WHAT YOUR ASKING, TAILS.

[TAILS]
Legs go don't you mean let's go when you say that?
What other name has the letter A at the end of it

[TIFFANY]
~~OOPS. SPELLING ERROR. I'LL FIX IT AS SOON AS I CAN.~~
FIXED!

And I think I'm eating less I've seen two different ways to spell her name Tristing. Any other one has an 8mp end of it

[TAILS]
The other name has the letter A at the end of it. /. yeah I finally got the tablet to say it right now

[TIFFANY]
~~OOPS. AGAIN.~~ FIXED...I THINK? I MAY HAVE MISSED ONE OR TWO MISSPELLINGS.

[TAILS]
The villages not wholly

[TIFFANY]
~~OKAY, OKAY! I MADE A FEW MISTAKES!~~
AGAIN, i THINK I GOT 'EM ALL IN THIS SECTION. COULD YOU CHECK?

[TAILS]
Ok kama to politics get back

Okay, I'm at the part when they just get back. And yes there has to be fixed on that for the wheelchair and sliding tree

[TIFFANY]
THE WHEELCHAIR USED THE 'EGG' MODE TO SLIDE DOWN THE TREE AFTER SONIC AND SALLY.

[TAILS]
The show look like it was already dark by the time they got back to the village

Are you trying to fill in time gaps?

[TIFFANY]
PRETTY MUCH

[TAILS]
Chapter 4

part 2

Now in the part when she is with rotor exploring her acting ability

And you say spent most of the afternoon with him what day is that supposed to be tomorrow what is that supposed to be yesterday what is it supposed to be a flashback memory you need to put a timing that's on there like what day and what time is happening. Because this part is very confusing.

[TIFFANY]
UGH. I HATE MOBIUS DAY NIGHT CYCLE.

[TAILS]
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Why is rotors name. In a sentence when you're talking about the keyboard and eyes glowing. The second time his name is mentioned I understand why but the first time

=========

Where did they get the Spy orb. / I don't remember reading about them picking one up in Robotropolis earlier

[TIFFANY]
IF I'M IMAGINING THE SHOW RIGHT, NOT ALL MISSIONS THE FREEDOM FIGHTERS WENT ON WERE SHOWN. I'M TALKING LESS EXCITING MISSIONS SUCH AS RECON AND GATHERING SUPPLIES FOR BUILDING. MAYBE THE SPY ORB WAS COLLECTED DURING ONE OF THOSE MISSIONS.

[TAILS]
Okay now there is a big button on the keypad. Are you sure you want it to be that? What about a picture of a UFO instead. And where do I put this button

[TIFFANY]
THIS?
"Okay bolt bottoms," Tristina snarled, glancing briefly to her right wheelchair arm. "THIS is where we part company!" Tristina cried, jamming all of her fingers on a button with a ring etched into it.

THAT'S THE TURBO BOOST BUTTON.

[TAILS]
Also the problem you're talking about her being on a mission when she presses. How to be a flashback memory or you have to will do it. Somewhere earlier in the story

Where is the part when Sally 9000 reads. a bedtime story to tell

[TIFFANY]
I PUT IT AS A FLASHBACK NEAR THE END.

[TAILS]
What's lapine?

[TIFFANY]
LAPINE IS ANOTHER WORD FOR RABBIT. IT IS DERIVED FROM THE FRENCH WORD FOR RABBIT, WHICH IS LAPIN.

[TAILS]
You ever noticed in the show you never see her talk to herself
It's never there I wonder if it was cut when they were making episode

If she's going to be talking to herself to you have to have some scenery or set for circumstances where he sees this happening

[TIFFANY]
I HONESTLY THINK TAILS WAS IN SUCH A HURRY TO EXPLAIN TO SONIC THE URGENCY OF THE SITUATION, HE PROBABLY PARAPHRASED. It's NORMAL WHEN SOMEONE IS PANICKED AND SCARED LIKE HE WAS.

[TAILS]
Also sonic doesn't chuckle. back at tails. In the episode did you add this part? For affect. Or are you reading of a special script? That didn't make it to production

That's the end of chapter 5 part 1

[TIFFANY]
HE DOES CHUCKLE...ALMOST. LISTEN TO HOW SONIC SAYS "HEY LITTLE BUD, YOU MUST'A HAD ONE MONSTER DREAM" YOU CAN ALMOST HEAR THE CHUCKLE UNDERNEATH HIS COMMENT

[TAILS]
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Next chapter 5 part 2

How can sonic grab her wheelchair wheels.

[TIFFANY]
~~OOPS. YOU CAUGHT ANOTHER SPELLING BUG. I MEANT TO SAY 'HANDLES' NOT 'WHEELS'~~
FIXED

[TAILS]
If someone did that to me I couldn't drive my chair

T2 thats funny. Just think of tails of as the Fox terminator

[TIFFANY]
I BORROWED THE NICKNAME FROM THE DOOMSDAY PROJECT WHEN SONIC SAYS "DUNNO, T2. IM CLUELESS"

[TAILS]
Should the really be bad words in the writing of sat am sonic story

It just doesn't seem right. me after all this is not South Park

I know people say that stuff in real life. But don't you wish they didn't

I'm just saying

[TIFFANY]
BAD WORDS? WHERE?

[TAILS]
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Chapter 5 part 3

What does is mean. / *****ily

[TIFFANY]
UGH. I SHOULD HAVE SAID SNICKERED INSTEAD OF SNIGGERED. SORT OF LIKE YOU WANT TO LAUGH, BUT YOU STOP YOURSELF?

[TAILS]
Are hover units supposed to be the things that the swat boys fly in. ?

[TIFFANY]
YES.

[TAILS]
In the part about the hooks hidden Hover unit. I'm not sure if what you wrote matches up to what I saw on screen how it was destroyed

[TIFFANY]
I REWATCHED PARTS OF THE EPISODE MYSELF TO MAKE SURE I WAS DESCRIBING EVERYTHING CORRECTLY. THAT WAS WORD FOR WORD WHAT HAPPENED (MINUS THE CREATIVE BITS WITH TRISTINA, OF COURSE)

[TAILS]
Yes I do need to see the episodes as I'm going through this. To understand the setting more

[TIFFANY]
NOT A PROBLEM. FOR REASONS STATED PREVIOUSLY, I DO TOO.

[TAILS]
When rotor says we got to move it And he waved his arm Please mention which arm and how he moves it

[TIFFANY]
FIXED!
"Come on, we've gotta move it!" the walrus added, motioning with his hand towards himself for the others to follow.

[TAILS]
What do you mean rotor miss the exchange Between Sonic and Sally and your character

Are you talking about the looks they gave each other ?

[TIFFANY]
PARTIALLY, ALSO, ROTOR DIDNT HEAR SONIC ASK: "Yo, Sal, what you put in the ol' cereal this mornin'?" Sonic asked, rubbing the spot Sally had struck.

[TAILS]
Also win Sonic and rotor. Duck down the window. Just as that hovercraft is coming by. Where is the part they say wool!

[TIFFANY]
JUST BEFORE THE HOVERCRAFT FLIES PAST.

[TAILS]
Also please note I'm not sure if I'm getting all the details right in the right spots. I'm bouncing between a notepad. / the story. And the episode on YouTube

[TIFFANY]
ITS OKAY. IM BOUNCING BETWEEN THIS Q&A, AND THE STORY ITSELF. SO WE'RE EVEN.

[TAILS]

Pseudo- Sally. ?

[TIFFANY]
I THOUGHT IT SOUNDED BETTER THAN 'FAKE SALLY', 'OTHER SALLY' OR 'SALLY 2' TO BE HONEST.

[TAILS]
I like the part when you split up sonic speech between the two characters. What he says in the show tells was right You're not sally. I thought that was a nice touch .........

[TIFFANY]
AWWW, THANK YOU! I WAS WONDERING WHAT LINES I WAS GOING TO GIVE TIFF, AND I THOUGHT 'HEY, WHY NOT SPLIT SONIC'S LINE BETWEEN THEM?' IM GLAD IT WAS SOMETHING YOU NOTICED AND APPRECIATED. BE ON THE LOOK OUT FOR SIMILAR TRICKS IN LATER 'BOOKS'

[TAILS]
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Chapter 6 part 1

What is the stuff that she sprays in the ground called you gotta put in the name Of what it is
[TIFFANY]
I DONT HAVE TO. SONIC ALREADY DID IT FOR ME!

kidding into an abandoned parking garage, Sally pointed her right finger at the floor and sprayed out a familiar lumpy dark green sludge on the ground. The second she was finished, Sally raced behind an abandoned non-functioning heater. Seconds later, Sonic came into the garage in pursuit of the robot. "Woah!" Sonic cried as the dark green sludge clung to his red and white sneakers, holding him fast to the ground. grunting, Sonic lifted his shoe as long strings of the lumpy dark green slime clung to his shoes.

"Mega Muck!" Sonic declared, continuing to struggle in the lumpy dark green goo.

[TAILS]
Also when Sally shooting stuff. Mention the color of your energy beam that is firing

[TIFFANY]
AGAIN, ALREADY DID:
'Sally' pointed her laser finger at a dull gray brick wall as she ran. a blue laser leaped from her finger
and struck the wall, blasting it apart like rubble.

[TAILS]
We should have as much visual information to The reader as possible

[TIFFANY]
I AGREE WITH YOU ON THIS, T2

[TAILS]
Bunny doesn't look beige to me. More of a coffee brown Or mocha brown. Whichever way you want to say it

[TIFFANY]
CAN I MEET YOU HALF WAY AND SAY SAY A LIGHT COFFEE? IT SEEMS HER FUR COLOR CHANGES SHADES EVERY COUPLE EPISODES OR SO.

[TAILS]
Did you notice that when the energy beam from Power ring shootout In the show. There's no visual indication whatsoever. Of where the energy blast gos. That detail needs to be fixed

Because in the cartoon it just disappears like it never happened

[TIFFANY]
HERE IT IS
http://www.mediafire.com/file/24n189izvx5l1ce/sonic_power_ring_beam.png

I HAD TO REWATCH THE SAME SCENE 3 TIMES TO CATCH IT. IT HAPPENS VERY FAST, BUT IT DOESNT SHOW WHERE THE BEAM GOES. IM GUESSING SONIC WAS AIMING AT 'SALLY' AND MISSED?

[TAILS]
;__________________________________________

Now at this point when you're talking about real Sally Being restrained

Above that, before you start reading this It should read.

Meanwhile back at robotics. Lab / Or command center / hIs base of operations
And the robot making lab
[TIFFANY]
THAT'S WHAT THE DASH LINE (--------) WAS FOR. I USE THAT WHEN I WANT TO SWITCH SCENES.

[TAILS]
It also should be mentioned that Sally. Turned her left eye. Towards Dr nicks. Screen. It looks like it's almost right behind her

[TIFFANY]
KINDA HARD TO DO THAT WHEN THE HEADREST IS AS TALL AS SALLY IS, TAILS. OTHER THAN THAT, IT LOOKS LIKE YOUR RIGHT
http://www.mediafire.com/file/3mqj4c559mrfldc/sally_robotnik_position.png/file

[TAILS]

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Chapter 6 part 2

Where is tiffs / your hard drive ?

[TIFFANY]
IVE ACTUALLY NEVER THOUGHT OF THAT. WHEN SHE'S IN 'HACKING MODE', TIFF'S MEMORY IS HER 'HARD DRIVE'. SHE STILL HAS ACCESS TO HER SENSES (HENCE WHY SHE CAN HEAR AND ANSWER QUESTIONS WHILE HACKING) BUT I GUESS HER MEMORIES ARE HER 'HARD DRIVE'.

[TAILS]
I'm sorry it's just easier this way

[TIFFANY]
ITS OKAY

[TAILS]
Here I'm thinking project Sally. Is happening right now with robotic turning her into a robot

Or is it something else?

[TIFFANY]
SOUNDS ABOUT RIGHT. THATS SOUNDS LIKE WHAT ROBOTNIK MEANT WHEN HE SAID HE WOULD MAKE 'A NEW IMPROVED MODEL'.

[TAILS]
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Chapter 6 part 3

A sonic tugged. on a medal round great

[TIFFANY]
THIS?
Tristina glanced behind her as Sonic tugged on a metal grate that covered a bluish-gray pipe.

[TAILS]
And mention something about the size of the two.

Some of the senses are misspelled and mispronounced. Because of my tablet.

So. I hope you understand what I mean

Any questions let me know

[TIFFANY]
NOTE TO SELF, RUN SPELL CHECK BEFORE PUBLISHING FUTURE FAN FICTIONS.

[TAILS]
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What is all this talk about smoke coming from a disconnected pipe. ?

What's important about that pipe. ?

[TIFFANY]
AGAIN, ITS ONE OF THOSE QUICK CLIPS YOU NEED TO SLOW DOWN THE VIDEO FOR.
https://www.mediafire.com/view/8jlj6n83iivxrpw/sonic_exaust_pipe.png/file
THE SMOKE/STEAM/EXHAUST PIPE OBSCURED SALLY FROM SNIVLEYS VIEW. IT ALSO ALLOWED SONIC AND TRISTINA TO RESCUE SALLY AND REPLACE HER WITH THE ROBOT.

[TAILS]
Garage like door I don't remember that in the episode

[TIFFANY]
THIS EPISODE SEEMS TO HAVE HAD A LOT OF CLIPS THAT WERE HARD TO TRANSLATE TO FANFICTION. THE DOOR REMINDED ME OF A GARAGE.
https://www.mediafire.com/view/s43d8pu5lxdnxv8/sonic_sally_door.png/file

[TAILS]
I don't mind telling your last part chapter 6. I had to reread. Got a little confusing when you were talking about real Sally. And the Sally robot. Between the parts of the robot destroy everything

[TIFFANY]
YEAH, IT WAS A LITTLE CONFUSING TO WRITE THAT SCENE AS WELL. SO I GUESS SOME OF MY CONFUSION TRANSLATED INTO THE READING PART? I HONESTLY DONT KNOW. TO CLARIFY, WHILE TRISTINA WAS FINISHING UP DELETING KNOTHOLES INFORMATION FROM THE SALLY ROBOT, SHE LEFT A BIT OF CODE BEHIND. WHEN SNIVLEY TRIED TO ROBOTICIZE THE FAKE SALLY, TRISTINA'S CODE WAS ACTIVATED. THATS WHEN THE FAKE SALLY'S EYES CHANGED COLOR AND GAVE ROBOTNIK A THUMBS UP (TO WHICH TRISTINA HAD JUST DONE THE SAME EARLIER) AND DESTROYED THE LAST SCREEN.

[TAILS]

And the park Sonic and Sally being on another vew screen. Cuz there seemed 2 be. To parts to that

I think that needs. To be cleared up some more.

[TIFFANY]
WHAT DO YOU THINK NEEDS TO BE ADDED?

[TAILS]

As well as details about the description about how Sonic came in at that air shaft looking tunnel. Crawl space
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[TIFFANY]

THAT WAS THE AIR DUCT THAT THE FAKE SALLY CUT INTO WHEN SONIC POINTED HER FINGER AT THE GRATE AND SAID 'TORCH IT'.

[TAILS]
Notes from tails. /

I asked questions as I read bit by bit

But sometimes I forget because. I m going to all the chapters

[TIFFANY]
IF I MAY BE HONEST, IT GETS A LITTLE EXHAUSTING ON MY PART TOO. BUT, IF IT HELPS TO CLARIFY SOME THINGS OR MAKE THINGS EASIER, THEN I GUESS ITS WORTH IT.

[TAILS]
I t might have ch-5. But the part when my namesake. Ant Tiffany / I think ant part part should be dropped. Because for one thing. There's no mention about how much time is passing from: b1 to b3 and she was the outsiders

It just doesn't seem like. My namesake would get attached to her in that way that's fast. / that's just how I feel about it. / - maybe it would happen if something bad happened to Sally or bunny. But I could only see it happening under those terms
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[TIFFANY]
I GUESS YOUR RIGHT. I MEAN, TRISTINA STILL CALLS SALLY 'PRINCESS', EVEN THOUGH BY MY GUESS TRISTINA JOINED THE GROUP 3 WEEKS AGO BY THE TIME THIS EPISODE AIRED. (THE SHOW ONLY AIRED ON THE WEEKENDS, RIGHT? SO IF THE SHOW DIDNT SHOW ALL OF THE MISSIONS, (LIKE I MENTIONED EARLIER) THEN THAT MEANS THAT A WEEK PASSES INBETWEEN EPISODES. (SAVE FOR BLAST TO THE PAST PART ONE AND TWO) SO, BY THAT CALCULATION, TRISTINA WOULD HAVE BEEN WITH THE FREEDOM FIGHTERS FOR ABOUT 3 WEEKS.

[TAILS]
Chapter 7

What type of canine wasn't. That post the wheelchair. Couldn't we just call him a dog. ?

[TIFFANY]
JUST A REGULAR FREEDOM FIGHTER. I IMAGINED IT WAS THE DOG THAT WAS CARRYING ROTOR, BUT I FORGOT ROTOR WAS BEING CARRIED AS WELL.

[TAILS]
I'm just trying to keep it simple for young readers. And anyone else have trouble reading the occasional word

[TAILS]
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ThIs part of your namesake at this part of the story

She thought. smiling to her robotic legs

[TIFFANY]
IM...NOT SEEING A QUESTION?

[TAILS]
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In the next part want to talk about Sally find tails. Is it meant to be the next day. Because the cartoon they got home at night. And it ended two moments later on that night

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In the part when it comes to bedtime story. And the real Sally supposed to be able to hear everything

With What's going on in a knothole

Can you please give. More explanation for how you wrote it like this why you did it. Cause it seems like a plot hole

If this is how its gonna be. There should be some indications earlier in the story. That real Sally can here this going on

Cuz as it is in the cartoon it seems only Robotnik can hear everything on what's going on

I would change that

[TIFFANY]
IF YOU LISTEN EARLIER IN THE SHOW, WHEN SONIC ANNOUNCES THAT HE JUST 'HEARD' THAT THE SWATBOT FACTORY WAS STILL ONLINE. AFTER THE FAKE 'SALLY' STAMMERS HER LINE, WHEN SONIC SAYS 'THIS TIME WE LIGHT THE SUCKER', THE SCENE SWITCHES TO ROBOTNIK AND THE REAL SALLY LISTENING TO THE WHOLE THING WHILE SALLY IS IN THE ROBOTICIZER.

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Everything else after seems okay

TIFFANY JONES / TIFF 15 · « **Reply #3 on:** May 07, 2021, 09:46:25 am »

QUESTIONS FOR BOOK 4: PROBE PROBLEMS

TAILS
THAT P WORD FOR THE FAKE SALLY AND THE NAME OF TRISTAN'S CARETAKER I CAN'T PRONOUNCE IT BUT I WAS ABLE TO READ AND UNDERSTAND MOST OF IT I'M JUST THINKING WONDERING DID YOU GET THIS ALL FROM THE SHOW OR WERE THE COMICS INVOLVED BECAUSE SOME OF THE LOCATIONS I DON'T REMEMBER OR RECOGNIZE

TIFFANY
PSEUDO IVE USED BEFORE IN RL, AND IVE HEARD IT USED IN ADVENTURE OF SONIC THE HEDGEHOG. 'JULIA' IVE USED IN MY STORIES, AND I PICKED IT UP FROM THE COMICS. PSEUDO IS PRONOUNCED SUE - DOE

TIFFANY JONES / TIFF 15 · « **Reply #4 on:** September 13, 2022, 04:06:46 pm »

QUESTIONS ON CHAPTER 1 PART 3
[TAILS]
OKI didn't think I would have input apparently I do
[5:59 PM]
One what episode part is this Like the number of the episode cause I don't think you're modeling this from the comics
[6:00 PM]
And to did a fire break out or did Snively press something to activate the fire extinguishers to Use them as weapons against the heroes
[6:00 PM]

?

[TIFFANY] — Today at 6:02 PM
SNIVELY SENT THE SWATBOTS TO THE ROOF (AS YOULL SEE IN A MOMENT) OUTSIDE THE BUILDING. HE THEN ACTIVATED THE FIRE EXTINGUISHER TO FORCE SONIC, SALLY, AND TRISTINA OUT TO THE CATWALK, RIGHT INTO WAITING SWATBOT LASER FIRE.
[TAILS] — Today at 6:04 PM
Oh OK so I guess you're leaving that part not explained for the next section of section of texts of the story
TIFFANY — Today at 6:04 PM
THIS IS EPISODE 04. AND YEAH, PRETTY MUCH.

QUESTIONS ON CHAPTER 1 PART 4

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